All you English-grammar whizzes?

All you English-grammar whizzes?
Below is the wording from my resume (ignore the formatting it just looks crazy because i copied and pasted) – Anyway, I had a prospective employer tell me that I had random capitalization through out the resume… I know the First Letter next to the bullet points should be capitalized but i’m not sure which ones can be .. un-capitalized? if that’s a word… Need some help!!!

Seasonal Marketing Coordinator
Kings Island Theme Park, Mason, Ohio (5/08-10/08)

•Face-to-Face Guest Satisfaction Surveys in the park
•Research competing theme parks to generate future possibilities for Kings Island
•Traveling outside of Park to promote park events and distribute marketing materials
•Practice Guerrilla Marketing techniques to promote park events
•Managing Group Picnics ranging from 50-4,000 guests
•Wrote verbiage for bulletin, flyers, and misc. marketing materials

Specialty Accounting Intern
Great American Insurance, Cincinnati, OH (5/07-4/08)
•Extensive Data Entry
•Prepared Balanced Journals through Microsoft Excel
•Sorted and allocated database reports to proper authorities
•Filed Reports for Accounting Representatives
•Opened/organized/distributed in-coming office mail
•Processed weekly out-going mail
•Updated monthly paper inventory

Sales and Customer Service Associate
TJ Maxx, Florence, KY (12/04-1/05 & 10/01-8/03)
•Designed/Organized Merchandise for End-Cap Displays
•Prepared merchandise with security devices
•Updated inventory with price-tag scanner
•Handled debit/credit/cash/gift card transactions
•Reconciled cash drawer at day’s end

Arts & Crafts Director
YMCA Summer Camp, Burlington, KY (5/04-8/04)
•Planned and taught art-project activities to 80-100 children
ranging in the ages of 5-15 years old
•Worked with allotted budget for Arts & Crafts division
•Bought all materials needed for projects through craft stores and catalogs
Thank you! Both great answers. I dont really know why I capitalized so much!! Good advice also about including my achievements in my resume, thank you!

Best answer:

Face to face guest satisfaction surveys.
Park in the middle of a sentence 9unless the place is called Park) needs no capitalisation.

I agree too many unnecessary capitals throughout.

I think tht for your latest job you could include not just what you did but what you achieved.
Guerilla marketing for instance.
State what business did you generate and how..

Hope this helps

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