Is this sales letter need to be corrected?Is there any grammar mistakes? Anyone , please correct and rewrite i?
Is this sales letter need to be corrected?Is there any grammar mistakes? Anyone , please correct and rewrite i?
Dear Mr David Charlesworth / Export Sales Manager,
I got your contact details from >exportuk.co.uk/exporters.php?… > website!
We understand, you are seeking new business in Malaysia ( i.e seeking Agents or Distributors or looking to add to your business partners / customers from this region. We understand from the industry, that to print product catalogs in your country and posting to many individuals to overseas prospects is very very costly.
To help you save your printing cost and postage cost, with your CATALOG ARTWORK sent to us, we are able to re print your catalogs or leaflets here in Malaysia and post it companies that are involved in importing and distributing >Self Adhesive Labelling Machines, IP65 Cross Web & In-lne Label Heads, Print & Apply & Linerless Labelling Systems, Desktop Printers, Desktop Printer Consumables, Plain & Printed Labels, products in Malaysia.
We have in hand many local business directories (i.e yellow pages) and we know who are dealing related to your products in Malaysia. This way, we can help you save a lot of money for your company. It is very economic, easy and fast to locate potential agents and distributors from Malaysia.
We can also print your catalogs or leaflets in volume and we can also post it your customers in the neighbouring countries i.e Thailand, Singapore, Indonesia, Philippines etc if you receive inquiries from these countries. The postage rate is very cheap from Malaysia to i.e Thailand, Singapore, Indonesia, Philippines.
Try us out, and you can see the results! If you have any questions, please fee to email me.
I look forward to hearing from you!
Thanking you.
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2 Comments for Is this sales letter need to be corrected?Is there any grammar mistakes? Anyone , please correct and rewrite i?
1. idothiswhenimbored | November 22nd, 2010 at 10:51 am
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2. Bookbinder | November 22nd, 2010 at 11:29 am
For the attention of Mr. David Charlesworth (Export Sales Manager).
Dear Mr. Charlesworth,
I obtained your contact details from (….website…).
We understand that you are seeking new business in Malaysia, and that you may be interested in finding agents, distributors, business partners, and customers in this region.
We are aware that the cost of printing product catalogues in your country, and of posting them to multiple addresses overseas, can be quite high.
We can help you to save on your printing and postage costs, if you send your catalogue artwork to us. Your catalogues or leaflets can be printed here in Malaysia, and can then be posted to companies that are involved in importing and distributing the following products in Malaysia:
Self-Adhesive Labelling Machines;
IP65 Cross Web and In-Line Label Heads;
Print and Apply and Linerless Labelling Systems;
Desktop Printers;
Desktop Printer Consumables;
Plain and Printed Labels.
Many local business directories, such as Yellow Pages, are available to us, and we have a very good overview of Malaysian businesses that are connected with your type of products. This can help us to make significant savings for your company. It is very economical, simple, and efficient to locate potential agents and distributors from a base in Malaysia.
We also have the capacity to print your catalogues or leaflets in volume, and we can post them to your potential customers in neighbouring countries, which include: Thailand; Singapore; Indonesia; Philippines, should you receive inquiries from those regions.
Try us out, and we have no doubt that you will be pleased with the results! If you have any questions, please feel free to email me.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
[your name here]
[Please note: in some places, you use British English spelling (neighbouring), and in others you use American English spelling (catalogs). As I am British, I have taken the liberty of using British English spelling. A final remark: never use "Thanking you", or "Thank you in advance", in a letter. It makes the letter seem to be amateurish and unprofessional. Never thank anyone for something that you have not received.
I hope that my version meets with your approval.]
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